User blog comment:RottenBlock/System 1 Compilation/Little Vampire, Part 8/@comment-40164738-20191228151803

Good stuff, decided to go through it. It helps I've played it before in Japanese though being able to read it makes it easier. I've noted down some things I've noticed, mostly minor typos and only worth a patch if you ever decide to do another pass for editing. I hope the formatting carries over, otherwise excuse the mess. The biggest thing I found was a blank textbox (2nd chapter inn) and the Ichitarou confusion (?-tarou and in the end game credits as nii-chan?). Apart from that two bugs, but I'm pretty sure the first bug doesn't need fixing as a newline helps out just fine. Either way they are probably part of the port to begin with, just noted them down as well. Either way very smooth translation experience, the game itself not so much at times.

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General game bugs, probably not fixable: Text overflow, though I guess a newline fixes this. Issue is that when it overflows characters outside the dialogue box stay. It's fixed by a restart. I went into the inventory menu after a sprite/cg overlapped another (waterfall/goddess). The goddess disappears, but I can still interact with her.

Music staff: ?-taro is probably any of the presumed pseudonyms Dragon Attack used (ichi-taro, nii-taro, believe it was just numbers before the taro). VNDB lists 一太郎 (Ichitarou). He also went by the name of Ikazuchimaru if I remember right.

Prologue: "U took a look around the park."

1st chapter park: when talking to Miki three times and she gives you her bracelet. "What is is VALUABLE, I'm sure it'll sell high!"

Pawn shop: Text overflow when trying to take items. "...said while glaring at us." is illegible bargaining the bracelet: Kentarou line starts on a new line when going for 20 coins, probably supposed to be a colour command instead of a newline. Buying the Binoculars: "The ole woman... smiles!" probably supposed to be old?

Inn: When speaking with Masumi and receiving candy it's referred to as a box of desserts in one line? The image of the item looks more like candy as well. a Tavern back room: When asking arcy about her weight: "I want I could grow up" probably I want to grow up or I wish i could grow up.

Foot of Mount Saren: When asking "How do we get to the top of the mountain?" "The path if like a maze" typo, is.

Summit of mount saren: look>Miki "Miki adn I both take in a deep breath" and.

Drug store: After having delivered the shrinking violet to Flora and then speaking with Betty, kentarou's line juts just outside of the dialogue box. After finding the ghost at the river and asking Betting about it: "You have make all kind of medicine here."

Hermit's Home: When going here, Miki is left behind at the ladder. However Kentarou still says "we climbed the ladder" and "We discovered". When Looking at the hermit's beard it says "The hermit's house"

2nd chapter Waterfall: When hitting grass, miki forgets a comma in "well that was different". Asking the goddess about the purification fruit: "I can't say for certain, but it may be possibile."

Inn: speaking with masumi about the purification fruit for the 2nd time AFTER trying to talk to arcy and getting kicked out shows a blank text box (or rather it returns immediately).

Shining Fields: When trying to move to the source without being able to pass, lighning is misspelled. When succesfully going to the source one sentence is not on a new line. Probably for space reasons, however there's no space between the. and the next line.

3 chapter Linda's hut: If you look at the window, the word outside isn't finished.

Hermit: When speaking to the hermit (the tower cutscene): tainted is misspelled twice as tained

Dracula's castle field: When the Zashiki-Warashi steal event happens. "Zashi-Warashi" appeared and the Katana is now just a sword. The second bit isn't wrong persay but still.

Tower: When speaking with the Robotic? (capslocked) girl: "I'm started to get frustrated..." Starting or I started

End game credits: Music guy should be Ichitarou again? I think. read the first line of this